Quote before : Benjamin Zander states “ I consider music to be a transformational experience”
Quote after: ” As the prominent composer Benjamin Zander puts it ” I consider music to be a transformational experience”
Quote before: Like Zander said Art “is a story. It’s an unfolding of a story”
Quote after : Zander himself writes, ” Art is a story. It’s an unfolding of a story”
The intro you gave to Zander in that first quote is a wonderful improvement! Nice work!